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Submitted: August 6, 2012
Image Size: 1.1 MB
Resolution: 1600×1066
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Critique by ~awesomecrafter Aug 11, 2012, 1:50:08 AM

The angle is quite perfect. A lot of the room is shown and it's bright enough to see and also dark enough to give out a feeling to the viewer. I wouldn't say it's the most original thing, it is original but I've seen many photos of abandoned buildings. The photo is straight so the camera doesn't look like it's been tilted too much and the face is put at an angle yet clearly seen which is good. I like how the window is brightened so you can't see anything outside of it, allowing the viewer to concentrate more on everything else in the picture.

So my criticism would be that it's not the most original photo in the world. Also, the way only one corner is dark makes it seem slightly unnatural (if this was intentional
then I would've added 4.5 stars to technique).

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~Zakily Nov 11, 2012 Hobbyist Photographer

absolutely wonderful photo!

~chainbreaks Aug 13, 2012

I love how you put the model on a platform such as the desk and with the lighting and other elements this looks amazing, Beautiful work. It's magnificent!

~Art1983 Aug 13, 2012 Professional Photographer

it's very beautiful dude... i love it

*lethe-gray Aug 11, 2012 Hobbyist Writer

I find myself far more interested in the room than the woman or her clothing, and obviously when an artist decides not to explain or give any kind of hint about what the session was about in their comment, I'm usually given to wonder why it's posted in a specific category. Fashion? Really? It looks more like urban exploration, and that's way more intriguing than yet another underwear model.